You did not seem sick when you were speaking about your pitch. I like the way you coordinate your hands to show the audience what product you are trying to sell. Also, you were not glancing around, rather focusing on the camera and making eye contact with your audience. Good job on your pitch!
You actually did a very good job on your pitch even you were sick, and I hope you get better now. I can learn a lot from you. You did a good job on eye contact, your dress, and your speed. Like I said on the previous post, the smart traffic light is so necessary for the traffic especially in city like Gainesville.
I think that your pitch is extremely clear and deliberate. I also appreciate that you are dressed professionally, it sets the tone for your elevator pitch. As I have mentioned in previous comments, I agree with you that traffic is a major issue within the Gainesville community. I believe that if smart traffic lights were installed, it would be much less of an issue.
Ben, You are very well spoken and collected in this video. I think this is a critical part to a good elevator pitch and you seem to have that idea down pact. I think you have a professional demeanor about yourself that shows you are credible and someone that people can listen to. Also, sorry to hear you are sick. Hope you feel better soon!
Great job on the elevator pitch and I think you did a great job. Overall your flow was good and you made solid eye contact throughout the video. I also like that you dressed up and took this assignment very seriously. I could not tell that you were sick and you sounded loud and clear. Hope you get better.
Howdy Ben, This was a very well thought out video. You spoke eloquently and with confidence, two things that I believe are essential in making a good pitch. Should you present your idea in front of a board of investors, I am confident that if you perform similarly, your biggest issue will be deciding which invest your want to go with. Also, could not even tell that you are sick!
You did not seem sick when you were speaking about your pitch. I like the way you coordinate your hands to show the audience what product you are trying to sell. Also, you were not glancing around, rather focusing on the camera and making eye contact with your audience. Good job on your pitch!
ReplyDeleteBen,
ReplyDeleteYou actually did a very good job on your pitch even you were sick, and I hope you get better now. I can learn a lot from you. You did a good job on eye contact, your dress, and your speed. Like I said on the previous post, the smart traffic light is so necessary for the traffic especially in city like Gainesville.
Hi Ben,
ReplyDeleteI think that your pitch is extremely clear and deliberate. I also appreciate that you are dressed professionally, it sets the tone for your elevator pitch. As I have mentioned in previous comments, I agree with you that traffic is a major issue within the Gainesville community. I believe that if smart traffic lights were installed, it would be much less of an issue.
Ben,
ReplyDeleteYou are very well spoken and collected in this video. I think this is a critical part to a good elevator pitch and you seem to have that idea down pact. I think you have a professional demeanor about yourself that shows you are credible and someone that people can listen to. Also, sorry to hear you are sick. Hope you feel better soon!
Hey Ben!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on the elevator pitch and I think you did a great job. Overall your flow was good and you made solid eye contact throughout the video. I also like that you dressed up and took this assignment very seriously. I could not tell that you were sick and you sounded loud and clear. Hope you get better.
Howdy Ben,
ReplyDeleteThis was a very well thought out video. You spoke eloquently and with confidence, two things that I believe are essential in making a good pitch. Should you present your idea in front of a board of investors, I am confident that if you perform similarly, your biggest issue will be deciding which invest your want to go with. Also, could not even tell that you are sick!