Overall, based on my last pitch and the feedback I received, I feel as though it comes down to just being in front of the camera and engaging your audience, which I think (hopefully) I did a better job with. Let me know what you think! Overall, I think I was just more comfortable in front of the camera.
Friday, November 10, 2017
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Overall, based on my last pitch and the feedback I received, I feel as though it comes down to just being in front of the camera and engaging your audience, which I think (hopefully) I did a better job with. Let me know what you think! Overall, I think I was just more comfortable in front of the camera.
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I definitely think you did a great job. Getting comfortable in front of the camera is something that I have had to adapt to as well but I think you have done a great job. Each pitch you have done has increased without losing any quality of the pitch. Engaging the audience is important and I think you did that great. Good job!
ReplyDeleteBen,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy watching your last elevator pitch this week. Also, I can see your improvement from your first one to this one, so you definitely do a better job with engaging your audience and being more comfortable in front of the camera. Moreover, I learned a lot of tips from your pitch to improve my own speech. Good job on all your pitches!
Hi Ben,
ReplyDeleteYou definitely look much more comfortable this time around. I think this was definitely your best pitch yet. Your speech was properly timed and deliberate and I think that you definitely engaged with the audience a bit more this time. I look forward to seeing more of your posts in the coming weeks.
Hey Ben,
ReplyDeleteI believe that your performance on this elevator pitch was great and it was a well-done video. Furthermore, you did a great job on making a connection with your potential investors by having a good flow in your voice and making good eye contact. Lastly, I can tell that you have been more comfortable on delivering your pitch.
Hey Ben,
ReplyDeleteI thought that you were comfortable infant of the camera last time but this elevator pitch showcased your remarkable improvements. I agree with the others, this is your best pitch. While watching your video, I felt engaged and I was eager to hear more, which, I think are two of the biggest goals for an elevator pitch. Once you have peaked the audience's interest, you can set up a time or meeting and really discuss and sell your product. Great job!